Superb Writing

I want to spend this week’s blog post focusing on the children’s writing. Each and everyone of them have worked so hard on their recent hot writing about an underwater creature that I want to share some of their work. 

Annie’s Introduction:

After years of searching, scientists finally caught sight of the transparent creature called the Rainbow Fish. The Rainbow Fish is on the verge of being extinct because of the plastic all over the ocean.

Zara’s Appearance Paragraph:

With its distinctive body, the Sealeacta is instantly recognisable. This animal is classified as a fish because it is cold-blooded and it has gills to breathe. Using its bioluminescent light, this elusive predator navigates in the murky, gloomy waters of the Midnight Zone. When it opens its mouth, this strange creature consumes anything in its path. The Sealeacta is the only animal that has blue skin so it can camouflage in the water to hide from predators.

Amelia’s Nutrition Paragraph:

The Long-nosed Devil Fish is an omnivore which means it ingest plants and meats such as seaweed, kelp and octopus. Unlike other predators, this creature turns its bioluminescent light red before it devours its prey. During Winter, it attacks young Bernafish known as Bernies to survive.

Max’s Habitat Paragraph:

For the majority of its life, the Moon Knight Fish dwells in the murky depths of the Twilight Zone. Unlike other predators, this scaly beast finds a safe cave to lay its eggs away from prying eyes. In Winter months, the Moon Knight Fish migrates to the Indian Ocean because of the warmer climate.

Our TTrockstar of the week is Keilan and our Lexia legend is also Tahha. Book club this week was hosted by Myra and Max. They chose ‘Starring Tracey Beaker’ by Jaqueline Wilson and ‘How High the Moon’ by Karyn Parsons.

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